Helen asks…review my college essay?Now this is my FIRST draft of my college essay. i literally just finished it, and want to know everyone's opinions. let me know and feel free to make any corrections!
It was a Monday night. I was sitting in an uncomfortable metal chair in a small room. Numerous heavy-set thirty year olds surrounded me talking about the latest gossip and greatest books to read. Yet there I was, a sixteen year-old self-conscious girl curled up in a chair. I was at weight
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